tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post2792883025726884809..comments2024-03-26T21:45:32.351+01:00Comments on En cada vers que has entès: Oh, digue'm la veritat sobre el NadalHelena Bonalshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12459084124496821166noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-80502541965506300202011-12-25T14:18:59.433+01:002011-12-25T14:18:59.433+01:00Gràcies, Jordi! La mètrica i el sentit perfectes! ...Gràcies, Jordi! La mètrica i el sentit perfectes! Bon Nadal un altre cop.Helena Bonalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12459084124496821166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-16939977623987447072011-12-25T13:11:02.714+01:002011-12-25T13:11:02.714+01:00Com a musa nadalenca que ets, el haiku s'inspi...Com a musa nadalenca que ets, el haiku s'inspira en el teu poema. Bon Nadal.Jordi Dorcahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457543523942035266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-59769685654809945962011-12-25T13:09:51.502+01:002011-12-25T13:09:51.502+01:00Tornem-hi:
Fusta, et travesso!
I ben dolçament ent...Tornem-hi:<br />Fusta, et travesso!<br />I ben dolçament entro<br />dins la nit freda. <br />PS: coi de mètrica! (sóc molt pesat)Jordi Dorcahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457543523942035266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-21731417590820463112011-12-25T08:49:16.402+01:002011-12-25T08:49:16.402+01:00Núria: d'això es tracta, de dir o d'acosta...Núria: d'això es tracta, de dir o d'acostar-se a la veritat.Helena Bonalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12459084124496821166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-15277897496441648822011-12-24T23:14:56.961+01:002011-12-24T23:14:56.961+01:00sobre el nadal no sabria dir-te... ara, ganes de s...sobre el nadal no sabria dir-te... ara, ganes de sentir paraules que diguin la veritat sempre... moltes :)Núria Talaverahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18062275163778686502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-58614291160928331972011-12-24T21:06:52.566+01:002011-12-24T21:06:52.566+01:00La fusta és tot allò dens, eixut, com "the wo...La fusta és tot allò dens, eixut, com "the wooden prose", eixut com la nit freda que malgrat tot travesses amb l'alegria del Nadal. Un haiku molt inspirat, no sé si gaire pel meu poema!Helena Bonalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12459084124496821166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-44541653109483981492011-12-24T19:29:49.518+01:002011-12-24T19:29:49.518+01:00Fusta, et travesso!
I dolçament entro, alegre,
di...Fusta, et travesso!<br />I dolçament entro, alegre, <br />dins la nit freda.Jordi Dorcahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457543523942035266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6303172858522058694.post-41355733826152432932011-12-24T19:16:06.129+01:002011-12-24T19:16:06.129+01:00L'autor ha eliminat aquest comentari.Jordi Dorcahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457543523942035266noreply@blogger.com